Puppies prance packed of giddy glee,
to the tire hung from the lone tree.
Carefree intentions, receiving the rose,
taking her place, directing the pose.
He push's, while her heart undergoes,
that floating sensation from hilly back roads.
And again he push's, and it never occurs,
that the turn to push, is never hers.
Feelings require one remaining desire;
to display mellow, while engulfed in fire.
Fore one moment alone is forever,
and being with her is nearly never.
But the desolate island begins to turn,
lying motionless, his stomach churns.
He urges to find food and water,
yet knows that he'll get no farther.
He is wise to th
Our brains are like scientists,
performing life long experiments,
on social behavior.
Every person we encounter,
is a new section in our logs.
Subconsciously; we observe,
and mentally write down,
how they appear to our senses.
And our observations,
change how we think of them,
whether it be slight or extreme.
No matter what, our experiments,
are never complete.
We always have more to know.
Always.
And without a conclusion,
these experiments,
...are just theories.
Puppies prance packed of giddy glee,
to the tire hung from the lone tree.
Carefree intentions, receiving the rose,
taking her place, directing the pose.
He push's, while her heart undergoes,
that floating sensation from hilly back roads.
And again he push's, and it never occurs,
that the turn to push, is never hers.
Feelings require one remaining desire;
to display mellow, while engulfed in fire.
Fore one moment alone is forever,
and being with her is nearly never.
But the desolate island begins to turn,
lying motionless, his stomach churns.
He urges to find food and water,
yet knows that he'll get no farther.
He is wise to th
I also like graphic design, and thats what I'd like to do in college.
Recently I've started writing poetry as well, if you could comment on those it would be awesome because im not sure what to think of my poetry yet. Thanks!
I enjoy all critique comments on any of my work! I usually don't take it personally, I just want to learn from my mistakes so feel free to let loose and tell me what you really think!
Hey Everyone :)
Take a look at my gallery! I appreciate comments, good and bad, on all my work :D
PLUS check out my two new poems, they're the first poems ive ever written so I'd really like any comments on them :) critique comments would be great!
THANKS! :D
Thanks for the fave. The colors are tweaked in Photoshop CS4 and then finished off with a plug-in called Virtual Photographer. They are considerably pumped up from what was a fairly wan scene!