Also this is my first poem ive written voluntarily So excuse the grammer and lack of vocabulary. The purpose of the poem is for the concept and insight, not for fancy words
Throughout the poem I never establish a main character specifically. I say "You", and "Your". Because I want the reader to put themselves in place of the main character. That was to impact the point that everyone judges.
Please if anyone has any comments I would really appreciate any feedback, good or bad. And any tips for any future poems I write.
Thanks everyone, I hope it impacts you somehow.
(Btw, the picture is an HDR I took in pennsylvania. I was going to upload it anyway but figured it sets a nice scene for this poem.)